the marijuana cave

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In from the snow of reality:
melodic scrawlings on the wall
bones in the back,
the dim black-light sun
shining from above.

outside, worries and dangers prowl
but(smoke in the air
pain draining from my brain)
this is my strong place,
my calm place,
and the rocky bottom
is soft as feathers

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Five.....

..from me too. Some strong atmospherics. Draws well on the paranoia that weed can create.

Tess

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
4th

and then the Grateful Dead poster fell on the floor. I liked the last two lines, nice contrast, I gave it a 5.

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