- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Memory of Water
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We are like
the memory of water
that never forgets.
Water that remembers
each and every
touch and tear.
The memory of water
is a liquid reflection
that never disappears
entirely.
- COMMENTS
FifthFlowerover 17 years agoThere is no "memory of water" that we can be like and so the "sentimental" characterization. Sentiment is fine, even tear-jerky sentiment is fine. What makes something sentimental is the falsehood behind the idea.
This is not meant as an attack, just a comment on how some readers will react to such "images".
Anonymousover 17 years agoexpressed so well...I read that page a couple years back..wonderful article...you make it flow like a stream...blue
Anonymousover 17 years agoSimply Gorgeous imagery and to me, the metaphor is deeply profound.
Anonymousover 17 years agotold. A simple and elegant poem
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