- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Most Faithful Suitor
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Click herefront door lolls on its hinges
shards of mirror shimmer on the floor
he's pissed on my bed, shit on the pillows
drizzled honey into my computer
'but I loved you!' on the wall in pink lipstick
I find him in the kitchen, his final offering;
eyes bulging, plum faced, dangling
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agoand skin's appalling
petals--how inspired
to be so Iying in the living
room drunk naked
and dreaming, in the absence
of electricity...
over and over eating the low root
of the asphodel,
gray fate...
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agovrose this is just creepy. I read it repeatedly. It gave me chills. To me, perfect.
Kobaabout 13 years agoAbsolutely horrifying! And magnificent! Perfect poetry! The ending was not expected (by me, anyway!) and that is a great way to end! 5+
fridayamabout 13 years agoI am still shivering.
(BTW, can't help but wonder how Theo would fuck this up)
