- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Night Before
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out this morning
under the stars
remembering love
in foreign cars,
sex in the front of a
Karmann Ghia
a dark-haired girl
named Lovely Lea,
she and I
casually met
she’d given up
sex for Lent,
her skirt was short
her hair was long
set on the piano
singing a song,
we had a drink
later that night
under a burnt-out
street light,
I kissed her
or she kissed me
found my hand
on her knee,
we proceed down
some winding lane
the fog was turning
into rain,
we copulated with
a bit of confusion
love, certainly
an illusion,
later that night
we got a place
got naked
face to face,
front to front
back to back
her hair was long
and silky black,
next morning
the car was dead
the battery
in the red,
so we returned
to the shower
probably spent
nearly an hour,
‘till the road guy
gave us a start
some country boy
whose name was Bart,
we drove back down
to The Night Before
and I watched her walk
back through that door,
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsalmost 14 years agodid not like the rhyme but that is just my preference, it would have worked better without it, the structure of the poem was enough to hold it together.
some great phrases in there and I love "she’d given up
sex for Lent,"
