- Erotic Poetry
- The Offering
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Click hereI would take you
open and inviting to the sweetness of my caress.
Will spread, and hands confined to the dream-state.
eyes locked together in shared knowledge, —agreeing—
control of the moment ceded to desire on both parts.
I would take you
trembling at my touch, fingers inflaming flanks
while tongue touches lips puffed in anticipation.
Standing; helpless to the advances of exploring fingers,
giving yourself totally in to the experience of now.
I would take you
trembling against the breeze of my breath falling gently
warming your skin after the passing of my lips —advancing—
soft and gentle into the sharp sting of my descending hand
capturing an outline in the warm pink of blushing cheek
I would take you
as you desired.
- COMMENTS
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agoyou have some goods, so keep at it. Keep posting and learning.
twelveooneabout 13 years agothis is kind of an interesting inversion of the normal structure. again
read some poetry, make it a little newer
Hack48about 13 years agoAuthorI like to try to convey a feeling in my poetry without becoming crude, no matter what the topic. I am glad that you could appreciate that, thanks again.
buttersabout 13 years agoWill spread, and hands confined to the dream-state
now that's a line worth writing. original, sensual, otherness... a descent into sensuality
nice use throughout of sound, and i found this to be quite well handled for its topic, avoiding most the pitfalls... what remains, though, echoes on beyond the poem is that one line i pulled out. it's something quite special!
