The Old Apple Tree

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Jennifer C
Jennifer C
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Going back to the place I call home
The place I ran and played,
Going home to start again
I remember the happy days.

When life was easy and troubles were few
The future a place far from my view,
With braids in my hair and cuts on my knee and
The swing which hung from the old Apple tree.

The branch that I climbed and eventually fell
The heart that I carved saying J loves L,
The shade it provided where I had my first fumble
And the sweet smell of cinnamon from mum’s apple crumble.

The apple which rustled then fell on my head
The swear word I used that got me sent early to bed,
The tree house I wanted that never got built and
The picnics we had on the old patchwork quilt.

Those were the times when I knew no danger
Theses days my smile is becoming a stranger,
But when I look back through my memories
The warmest of all is that old apple tree

Jennifer C
Jennifer C
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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Ahhhh, the Allure of the Simple

There it is,

the simple solution we all like,

embodied by that old Apple Tree.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Will you meet me

Will you meet me under that tree? I could offer you more than an apple.

Your poetry never fails to move me, Jennifer. Keep on writing, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
this form

is hard for me as well ...really enjoyed your images...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I like it....

Unlike the greater poets who dislike rhyme. I dig it

like a shovel. It makes the work easy to remember and a

joy to read. This poem is good, but the rhythm is off

some what. Still, I liked the picture it gave me as a reader. Mine was a weeping willow. sand

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
This is a great effort

I admire you for trying something new - a tricky format. Well done! Keep writing.

Tess

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