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Click hereTeasing, twisted, intertwined,
a devilish debauch, divine.
Tasty tangle arms and legs
gasping giggles pant and beg,
feast of flesh everywhere
striking, stroking skin and hair.
Flights of fancy without end
a frenzied fantasy with friends.
Marbled moonlight marks the time,
age-old rhythms create rhyme-
a moaning, panting symphony
titled simply "The Orgy".
---by je (jeutsler)
Congrats to you! This is one of the very few orgy poems I've ever read (and I know what you're thinking, but yes, I've read quite a few) that is not cliche or flat. This has a zippy spark to it. I love the quickness of your lines, the rhyme scheme, and your descriptive actions. It's tight, it reads quickly, and it seems to have a personality all its own.
Good job!