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- The Paled Dawn
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Click hereMy cock
columnar -
aching you
reaches from
my night
to yours:
the dark
confines
of your
flesh
to fuck
in the wet
breathless
surge of strength.
The force
grinds us
together
forming
something more
than arms
legs
bodies:
a bright
and blinding light
suddenly
suddenly
suddenly
fades
to a damp and
fragrant
warmth.
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3 Comments
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoNice climax
I enjoyed your deceptive simplicity as always but the one thing that didn't work for me was /The force/grinds us/together
It feels as though some third party is involved. Maybe it's just me.
b'brig
dcpoet44almost 19 years agothis one....
is conveyed to me in the language i can relate to. it is a nicely done piece.....don
