- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Point
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Ever the optimist,
She walked into the room, a smile upon her face.
The air was stained
With some unnamed
Unmentionable ugliness…
Her smile an awful strain against that point.
Ever the pessimist,
She looked around the room, a fear inside her eyes
That begged the question
In the air.
Unanswered
Unheard it stayed…
Her fear an acrid stench around that point.
Ever the realist,
She wrestled in the room, an ache within her heart.
It knew the answer,
Whispered it beyond
The screaming walls.
Unmistakable
Unerring it came…
Her pain redoubled wounds upon that point.
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 12 years agoTHE ROOM STILL HELD SECRETS FROM THE WALLS. tk u mlj lv nv
demure101almost 12 years agoshe found out about life - poor girl. Well done, Dawnj!
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoWow! this is a high functioning girl! Many (me included) tend to be permanently stuck on the 'ever the pesimist' if just for safety (or cowardness)...Being all three sequentially or more likely - all at the same time, is what makes our lives so damn difficult much of the time...
BTW- the title to my comment is actually a name of a play...
LeBrozabout 16 years agoLiving in a social setting {society} should make life better, but as your words show, t'ain't always the case.
