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Click heredarling, come to my porch
we'll hide behind mint leaves
count birds, watch chameleons
blush until night beckons
want wet as wine, dark
as bittersweet chocolate
This reads like a note on a card I wish was sent to me.
Thank you for sharing!
AND a garden??? damn, you must be my soul mate ;)
but seriously, very few words, you extend an invitation to so many...i can smell the mint almost
sensual, erotic, seductive....
it's all there
perfect word choice and placement
it doesn't get any better than this
so much like haiku, for me anyway
perhaps my favorite poem you've ever written
thank you