the porch

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laelia
laelia
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darling, come to my porch
we'll hide behind mint leaves
count birds, watch chameleons
blush until night beckons
want wet as wine, dark
as bittersweet chocolate

laelia
laelia
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Mmm

Nice work... short, but what a great impact :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Short

n'sweet. Very nice.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
A invitation

This reads like a note on a card I wish was sent to me.

Thank you for sharing!

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
chocolate

AND a garden??? damn, you must be my soul mate ;)

but seriously, very few words, you extend an invitation to so many...i can smell the mint almost

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
oh man

sensual, erotic, seductive....

it's all there

perfect word choice and placement

it doesn't get any better than this

so much like haiku, for me anyway

perhaps my favorite poem you've ever written

thank you

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