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Click hereMysterious
because you have no secrets
shockingly bold and demure
For an instant, your lush, ethereal body
is mine to embrace,
to cherish, to devour.
I rise at impossible hours,
my nostrils alive with Penhaligon's and wet pussy
evoking memories of the future.
Your eyes are open like your lips,
Your heart is light and agile like a swallow.
Without hesitation
you offer your oozing,
heartbreakingly beautiful cunt
to my mouth.
It tastes just like love
...can be liberating. Though I like your sonnets as well, I like what you've done here a lot. I like the rawness of the lust being expressed, and yet affection comes through. You throw light on the contradictions of the poem's subject, but at the same time express the tension and contradictions in the narrator: tension between raw, unashamed carnality and the beginnings of something else, softer and deeper. The free verse is, to me, perfect for this one, or so my instinct tells me.