- Non-Erotic Poetry
- the sandbox
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being a beginner
at this sort of thing
i knew nothing about
what it would take
for me to make it
but i picked up my
tools and got busy.
when it was done
i took a step back
to admire my work
it wasnt the best
still i was proud
and she was very
happy it held sand.
- COMMENTS
jthserraalmost 20 years agothat reminded me of the red wheelbarrow, where so much can depend. Very good...
jim : )
WickedEvealmost 20 years agobut I like to picture you building a sandbox for your daughter or niece. I know this poem can have many meanings, but I'm sticking with my version. :)
tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago...than meets the eye. Intricate and profound thoughts veiled by simple words. Absolutely beautiful!
YDDalmost 20 years agoWonderful and straight forward,
clear and so simple,
but so deep when thought about.
How many other things can this be a metaphor for?
Thank you for a good poem to think about.
