The Secret Audience

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The sunlight streams on woodland floor,

I hear you enter in.

I've seen you here with her before,

and something stirs within.

I move in for a better view,

and hide behind a tree.

And as you hold her close to you,

I wish it could be me.

Her whimpers speak of just how much

each soft caress is felt.

She trembles at your reverent touch,

and deep inside I melt.

And as your fingers take her higher,

her voice begins to quiver.

My body, filling with desire,

cannot supress a shiver.

My knees begin to buckle under,

I ache with jealousy.

Her every sound makes me to wonder,

-would you do that for me?

Her cries at fever pitch release,

and sing to me the score.

My longings for your touch increase,

'till I can take no more...

And so I flee back thru the trees,

while staying out of sight.

Her cries grow fainter on the breeze,

sun fades into twilight.

But your Secret Audience will return,

to vigil once again...

I can't resist to watch you learn to play your mandolin.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
In praise of rhyme and rhythm

There is something that gets me going when I read a poem with rhyme and rhythm. Even if it did not work so well towards the end, the effort is commendable. I guess the surrender to form gives a sense of serenity and distance, which when contrasted with the strong feelings give the reader an added pleasure.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

{One of my two favs of the day}

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