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Click hereIs there no greater pain,
Than the loss of one so dear.
The darkness pouring rain,
And trying to keep him near.
The pureness of his soul,
That shone its light so bright,
Coming to me now,
In the darkness of the night.
He guides me from the dark,
While the pain is slowly eased,
Watching over his family blood.
He shines so bright and stark,
Keeping his spirit pleased,
With guiding us through any flood.
Than the loss of one so dear"... which always brings heartfelt sorrow
The message here is strong.. and painful. I would break it up into stanzas so it really wraps into the soul of the reader.. give them time to digest the truth of what you write... hit home to me.. for I know loss and the pain..
blessings
Du~