- Erotic Poetry
- The Teaser
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smokey eyes
on me, lasting,
no uncomfortable sensation,
as day begins to dawn.
afterhours and before. limbo
in time.
sleep, wake, who's mourning is this?
the speakers blown;
the dj still drones,
intoxicants circulate through the bloodstream.
no one could even hear.
you. scream.
all you can find is porn
once the music is over.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoNice. I really liked the ending lines.
Suggestion: be careful of imcomplete sentences and punctuation. This is the only problem I saw.
Thank you for sharing.
Sincerely, saldne
