- Erotic Poetry
- The Tipping Point
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teetering on the pivot
almost aggravating axis
defended by resolve
ambushed incessantly
by tireless tongue
inquisitive fingers
diabolical devices
tightly constricted on teal sheets
withering, moaning, begging
for the timelessness of harmonious
orgasmic euphoria
struggling to stifle for a mere "Yes"
- COMMENTS
J.Doeover 18 years agoThe opening stanza of this poem is pleasant, but 'tireless tounge' is cliche.
Anonymousover 18 years agoyour writing here displays a complexity I did not see before. You seem to be growing and that is nice to see. I could feel this work which to me is a wonderful sign for the poet. Keep writing and learning.
du lac~
