The Velvet Tango

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~hellbaby~
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Listen, can you hear it?
The music has started

Feel the strings as they dance
The velvet tango
In rhythm with the horns
Melancholy wailing

Lust and passion serenade
The waltz of melding flesh

Ivory floats on desires wish
As loves anticipation
transcends reality

The orchestra and conductor
Feed each others fire
Fusing souls no longer seeking
With ecstasy’s desire

~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
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"Fusing souls no longer seeking

With ecstasy’s desire"

That's a wonderful line, perfectly conveying that moment of union that allows for the completion of two people.

Nicely done!

BelegonBelegonalmost 19 years ago
Ummmm, I like...

...this line:

"Lust and passion serenade "

...and I always like exploring the connections between two of our primal passions, music and sex.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Sweet~

Love with a lil musical twist,

gotta love that~!

More Please...

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Great work

a pleasure to read,

thanks.

~ J

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
A very...

enjoyable and nicely choreographed dance.

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