The Wall

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we all have walls we hide behind
walls we tell ourselves
that are not there
no don't look
its invisible
no one will ever know
tis not possible to see

we go about our days
and nights
wishing
hoping
that one day
we can let the walls disappear

finally we can be our "true selves"
the person we were meant to be
the one who laughs all the time
calls out to friends
sings in the shower
runs through the flowers
sprays everyone with the water hose

one day my friend
i will no longer need this wall
until then
pleases don't look
don't ask
whatever you do
don't
touch the wall

tis invisible
shhhhh
no one can see it
shhhhh
tis not there i tell you
shhhhh

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Beam_of_liteBeam_of_litealmost 17 years ago
~smiles~

The wall..the self contained prison...Took me a very long time to realise that no one could knock down the wall or open the gate...

One day...one very bad day...I pounded the walls with my fists...and screamed "enough enough" spit the key out of my gut and set myself free.

It has taken me far too long to discover your writing I think I'll linger here a bit

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
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The Emperors new wall. Very nicely wrote.

BD

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Walls

Yep I have walls,

I can't see them but

I know they are there and

I hope one day I can knock

them down, but not yet ~

Lovely poem RhymeFairy

you have the ability in

your writing to make me

stop and look inside myself,

to find my demons and try to

fight them.

Thank you.

~ J

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
wonderful

wonderful write, emotions unfolding and curved by the pen. I enjoy your literary creations, thanks...Art~