The Whip Lands Soft

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The Whip Lands Soft

Flying through the air the strands snap

Landing
creating a cry
yet you squirm in my lap

Begging
pleading – a lie
your eyes running like a tap

Please
more, more, a tie
holding you down caught in a trap

Yes
the bonds, you try
your defiance thick like sap

Harder
the strokes they fly
you let out a yell, “oh crap”

Master
yes more, you sigh
your ass creating a sublime map

Wet
you cannot deny
your masters entry into your loving trap

Still
quiet you lie
feeling the bliss of masters lap

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
it's a good read

but "oh crap" kind sticks out like a sore thumb. Maybe you could find another rhyme? :)

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
each verse

strikes like another flick of the whip- softly as the title implies. Enjoyable read. Thanks.

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