- Erotic Poetry
- the whisper
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Click hereyour subtle power speaks softly to me,
employing obsession’s occulted tongue,
of secret, wondrous pleasures that could be,
if i inhaled the heady opiate
of your calm dominion and acquiesced
to receive your lash with thankfulness
while you drink my pain as an elixir.
in this way you would serve my submission,
and cloak me in your strange and savage grace.
the carnal immanence of creation
would open to our hot embrace and we
would luxuriate in the rare treasure
of a timeless and shining indolence.
- COMMENTS
fridayamabout 14 years agothough I would question the last words of lines 7 and 13--they're not quite right, and break that sensuous rhythmic grace.
