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Click hereI crawled into an untidy bed,
curled my naked body to his
and lay still
until his breath was
at my back,
a soft tongue cooling
the sunburned skin
on my neck,
my round bottom pushing
closer and closer into the curve
of his body.
Spread fingers walked
the length of me,
chilled skin rising in ovation.
His warm hand skimmed
over the curve of my hip
to a waiting well–his fingers
tickled the surface and dipped
long into the warm waters
and he spoke close to my ear
words he had never spoken,
indescribable things
said only between lovers,
and turned my body to his.
'Shhh, not a word', he said,
and took a cool sip
then plunged
to the depths of the well
until-
all thirst was quenched.
Perfect capture of a supremely sensual experience! Exquisite!
A wonderful ode to shared love. Every word counts as meaningfully as your lover's touches.
Beautifully sensual.
"Spread fingers walked
the length of me,
chilled skin rising in ovation".
these lines came alive on the page. they have a certain grace about them. a nice start to your collection here.
Very fine erotic poem without harsh sounding sexual words or indelicate imagery. This poem is mentioned on the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum