This Ache

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this ache consumes me
countless days and nights
i reach for you
and your not there

breathing a fire through my loins
corrupting all it covers
exhaling as
flakes of ash erupt
all that is left
burning embers of longing

tunneling through to the other side
grime and smut cover me
small hiccups of arsenic spasms
rush forth
singeing all in its path
surrounding me
strangling me
with its ever present
blackness

nailing me in this casket
called life
life
without you

stifling shrieks
heartbroken sobs
tears rolling down
smut
grime
covered cheeks...

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Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Once again

You take me for a ride in this roller coaster world of love and hate that I have known so well and you so wonderful tell...

~Honey

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
god your so annoying!

and your poetry sucks!

what ever makes you think you have any talent? Pls stop posting such shite and give us all a break! I BEG YOU!!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
agree......

with the casket stanza as my favorite. but the smut and grime speak to me too.......nicely don......done

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
glad your back <grinin>

I enjoy your poetry <smile>

BelegonBelegonover 18 years ago
Too much?

some might say this is too harsh, but I can relate and I know I've felt it...

"nailing me in this casket

called life

life

without you"

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