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i feel the pain
coursing through me
pushing
seeking an out
if it stays i feel it
all of it
building
growing until i explode
from this evil fucking hurt
and so
out comes my faithful friend
my only true
forever companion
my blade
drawing it across my skin
i am released
as this life flows
from me
so to does this failure
this pain
i am no longer a writhing pile of hurt
of pain
i am simply
nothing
as i always have been
and ever shall be...

nothing

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4 Comments
jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
A painful poem...

the despair is well expressed.

jim : )

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
You are

more than nothing

you are a writer whose words touch many people

and you are brave for putting your pain out for all to see

these are admirable qualities

: )

thank you again for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
You are not alone

Lonelygal...know this. You are not alone. Others feel and share your pain. We have all been there, or are there ourselves. Hold true to yourself. There is always hope, and nothing is impossible.

I remain, Thesandman

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
An awfully dark view of life

If you consider yourself to be "i"

should your faithful friend be "Blade"?

I hope your next poem is of a more cheerful world view.

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