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Click hereA girl known as Lou
on the URL
entry left ajar
couldn't really tell,
the scheme behind the door
a tattered road motel
what will we do
what will she tell,
the other girls she knows
or does she know any
or is this a set-up
the flip of a penny,
Mugged and beaten dumb
watch and wallet stolen
a couple bones broken
eyes black and swollen,
or quick consensual sex
fast exchange of dollars
while her cell phone rings
with other eager callers,
I look both ways, decide
A good time to make tracks
escape this part of town
the fiction and the facts,
it's good, scored 5, it is pretty much straight though, could use a little more poetic reinforcement, a possible turn or two.