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DawnJ
DawnJ
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You watch them,
Lovers, you assume,
Walking hand in hand along the shore,
And thoughts well up
Of younger days,
Of brighter ways,
Of possibilities,
Now seeming gone,
Annulled by time
And force of circumstance.
You think how vast
The ocean of your pain,
How total, endless,
A forever separation
Between you and the new dreams
That have yet to birth themselves.
They lie dormant,
Awaiting the life-giving seed
Sewn in the heart
Through intercourse with hope.
But hope is preoccupied,
And you are out of time.

© 2014

DawnJ
DawnJ
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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Trailing after Demure

Really nice subtle thoughts woven together. Do not know how I missed this. Thank you Demure for commenting.

Possibly, it was the short lines (which I am not fond of as a rule) and being tired when I read this first. I still prefer longer lines.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
Thru' intercourse with hope :

Tremendous concept ; high5-ed !

demure101demure101about 10 years ago
Late for my life...

Indeed.