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Click herethe smallest of threads
slips from the seams
a target
or lure
bitter decisions help it unravel
sadder still was saying goodbye
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cloudyover 16 years agoshort and sweet
I like this very much. It has as much meaning or as little as the reader puts into it. I think this will stay in my mind for a bit, thanks.
Joe Wordsworthover 16 years agoHmmm
I don't think I understood that at all. *shrug* Sorry. Maybe I should take a class, huh?
WickedEveabout 17 years ago~
Good poem. Brief, nicely written, didn't make me cringe or giggle like a girl.
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