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Click hereNo wonder I hunger
to wind about the legs
of your rich table of words
like an old Tom
waiting to be noticed
then held
against the bosom of your intent
and fed tasty phrases
until a contented rumble vibrates within
and rasping tongue
licks away the last morsel
of delightful nuance
.........................
3.
Awaking from dreams
to overcast reality
Geminied clouds
of fact and fiction
falling
What better way to spend a rainy day
than by tying nets of words for you
Does it rain there
in deluge or sprinkle?
Are your clouds singular
or non-existent?
Does your coat of rain
make you impermeable
or can you feel
the drops
from my clouds?
Yours have found me
completely permeable
I am soaked
to the soul
.........................
Fin.
I've already commented on these in the Forum - but I think this is far and away among your best poems. It's not easy to be romantic without sounding either hallmark cardesque or just plain cheesy, but you pull it off. I like how you linked them together into one piece. I'm not totally convinced on the layout, but it doesn't detract from the poems so I guess it's harmless. Bravo!
bringing in a bounty for the table!
All three are witty and quite beautiful, my favorite being two! :)
Thank goodness you stirred my conscience to come over here and read or I would have missed this gem, it's fabulous and I am green with envy that I didn't write it myself. Not sure about the middle alignment but I see that it does compliment 'tying nets of words'