Tidal Death Dance

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Baba8
Baba8
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Tidal Death Dance


Gun shop explosion
13 gunners slung in snow
2 die, 11 live--slow.

Dancing, synchronized
riding ripples in the tide
a son sinks, dies.

One moon later
death tides high
6 fade, 6 die.

The father lives
he's strong, opens
cardboard milk cartons
with softball hands.

Baba8

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned on the review thread for Thursday.