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she
strips away
neat clothes
like liquid rhythm
each button
a new poem
for the muse
as skin exposes
a sleek canvas
clean, unmarked
by the artist
with fingers
to create
every nuance
of protean taboo
waiting in
the folded
denim blue
you made me want to put
on tight jeans ,
just to take them off..
wow !
what a vivd image you
paint of that beautiful
denim blu.......
*winks*
got a 5 from me !!
-sGp-
Others may have problems reading this but I did not, I also don't read with technical (critical) eyes either...but your poem is fine and put a smile on my face...thanks Art~
But why the short lines? "Liquid rhythm" seems to call for a more flowing format.
Thanks, Blue
Fly