Time Stands Still

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Steam rises from their bodies as the rain pours down
they feel nothing but heat amongst thier nakedness
horns honk, people yell, dogs bark
they hear nothing, but their own passionate moans of pleasure
time passes, people die, babies are born
they stand still, and savor each movement, each thrust
the hard wall agianst her back firmly supports her
her hair matted to her face, her eyes closed, her head held high in the air
she rocks with the motion
his hand on her thigh holding her one leg in the air
his brow crimped dripping sweat and rain,
his hair flowing off of his back; water runs from it like a river
his head bent down, eyes closed tightly, concentrating on each gesture
Time stands still, all noises cease
feeling no cold, feeling no hot, feeling turns into ecstasy
seconds pass, as the world stands still,
suddenly...
both collapse into each others arms, onto the ground, in the alley,
with the street lights, with the dogs barking, the horns honking, and the people yelling
their naked bodies shiver and the world is allowed to spin again.

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
naked rain

I enjoyed your poem (~_~) thank you for the read~