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Like the lime left in my mouth.
Like the aftertaste of tequila I left on my rumpled bed.
The hangover it gave me
Lingers
As you lingered in my head.
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Anonymousover 18 years ago~
hey I like this!
I would suggest taking out the "left on my rumpled bed"
the rhyme is neat, but takes away some of the power of your words.
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