Tiptoes and Two Lips

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(quite hard)
The bird in my hand
Scans across the great land
For a bush without company

(irony)
Could I pick how I’d fare
I’d die on a dare
And come back as a big girl’s blouse

(uptight)
There would be more of a smile
If every once in a while
She stepped out of her Freudian slip

(why?)
It was a dark and stormy night
And by the candle’s soft light
This was the all I could come up with

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
step forward !

You had enough here even in the first two stanzas. They could stand alone as two Haiku like poems.

Charming with the combination of passion yearning and volunarability. I second Mary's sentiment on your prowess. No need for apologies.

Maria2394Maria2394about 17 years ago
great!!

loved it! each verse made me smile. And there was no need for the pseudo-apology at the end, you done good!!!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sweet

happiness ~ depends on whose bush we're talking about.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
A bird...

in the hand is worth two in the bush.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Looks like someone's having fun here.