to all my girlfriends

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to all my girlfriends
who took the time to know me and
who took part of me with them too

who gave me what i needed and
who knew that i needed it and
who loved me and hated me both

who partied with me all night long
and who held me through the dawn
and who laughed and who cried too.

to all my girlfriends
to the ones i deceived in the end
to the ones who deceived me too

to the way you looked at me
to the way i looked at you and
to the way we looked at each other

to your eternal beauty and
to your adolescent desires and
to the visions you always inspire.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Nice thoughts!

Liked the sentiment. Some editing out of the repetitive "ands" would have helped to tighten it up.

AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
This is lovely, Steve!

I see you holding up a glass and toasting them all--the details are great--the ways you looked at each other, deceived one another sometimes--you've really captured some truth here. Thanks for the memories. :)

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