To Make Her Pleasure Mine

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To Make Her Pleasure Mine

Sweet Mistress, Her desire to fulfill,
She inspires me to resign
Body, mind, spirit and comfort to Her will,
And make her pleasure mine.

Why would i resist Her revealing hold,
Whose power forbids my delay?
Mistress guides me to be bold,
And casts my fears away.

And so, for Her, let me freely yield
To all that She designs,
For Mistress Christina, nothing concealed
Oh! To make Her pleasure mine!

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With your Domme writ;

A small suggestion on these lines:

"Mistress guides me to be bold,

And casts my fears away."

While the wording seems to say that Mistress casts the fears away, dropping the 's' has a more actively submissive tone by Mistress have Her sub cast fears away, like this:

"Mistress guides me to be bold,

And cast my fears away."

Just a suggestion.