To the Ascetics

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You see it as ignoble, this animal act
betrayed by culture's prohibitions on the skin
and on the raw and sometimes wordless machinations
of noble bodies worshiping themselves in counterbalance;
afraid of honest thrust and honest anger in your lives
you turn to conversation and you count it civilized.

But which is more courageous in its revelations:
the matching monologues of stories and opinions
or this straight naked face, approached in simple
kindness, unclothed and revelatory?

Which is braver, which more civilized
your lengthy exchanges of opinion, history,
of idea and pleasantry, however honest,
or the opening of a raw and blessed sacrament
the intimacy of flesh and bare desire?
Which the escape and which the deeper action
which acknowledges more imperfection
or reaches deeper into territory
foreign, threatening, revealing of the heart
Do not apologise or excuse this base desire
as yours is baser, clothed, disguised in language.
You'll never hear it, caught as you are in excuses
Thinking that courage comes from your denial,
your resistance of this darker territory
where flesh is honest and cannot dissemble.

Only the mouth can lie, the body's instincts
won't betray the truth or waste a sentence
only the mouth can lie, not cock or climax
muscles can't be made to clench in falsehood
the breasts do not dissemble, nor will vagina
resist the rise of pleasure in the belly
unless the mind resists with base distraction
from the honesty of sweat and slickness.
Only the mind can lie; the body's honest
and can't go back on movement or arousal
Clothe it as you might, its various juices
and flow of blood will out despite
your frayed resistance and the famines
you impose upon your own diminished flesh.

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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it may be a wonderful piece of writing, I just wonder despite it being a monologue, if it couldn't be just a little more poetically condensed. The mouth can bore too. Points made over and over again.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Cerebral and starts off a bit slow but ends on a strong and erotic note. Anyone reading this should take their time and read it at least twice; it gets better each time. For the most part, quite excellent.

AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
What a wonderful piece of writing!

It's not easy to write a poem that is both thought-provoking and erotic, but you've done it. I've only read it once but I feel it could be trimmed back a bit, maybe some white space added to give your provocative thoughts a moment to sink in before moving to the next idea. All in all though, just great writing. It'll be recommended in today's New Poems Reviews on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thank you for the lovely read. :)

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