To the Edge of a Pearly World

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To the Edge of a Pearly World

Where waves steal onto the boat
in black clouded slivers of wet
a morning sea yearns for the blue
unclouded skies, still hopeful
he reaches for the uneaten fruit
but, distracted by the dark
curve of a breast, finds warm grays
and black, her smoothly soft thigh.

They could burn again, a sip
spread in languid liquid, kiss
as fingertips mold to a face
a memory of what was once
a fine dust floating in the light
the remaining grit smeared
on her cheek, her eyes dreaming:
charcoal on an empty page.

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A BLANK CANVASS

needs a subject. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Five.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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I have no idea what anyone is talking about, some people go nuts for porn, I just like pictures. (5) Reminds me of my days on bikini.

Shiva and I.

TzaraTzaraalmost 14 years ago
You know, Mr. Twit, it's nice

to read a poem here by someone who can use imagery and (omigod) enjambment intelligently in a poem. I especially liked this: They could burn again, a sip / spread in languid liquid, kiss / as fingertips mold to a face

a memory of what was once / a fine dust floating in the light[.] I quite liked the ending image, though I'm not sure it makes rational sense. (Is the page empty if there is charcoal on it?) Good poem. Nice picture.

avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlalmost 14 years ago
nice

I like the flow and the imagery. Look forward 2 more.

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