Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereI have a problem with this;
heavy-lidded eyes loosely
shuttered to conceal improper
views from the reflection
in the mirror; I see you.
I know your want when fingers
weigh the strip of blind
just enough to be mistaken
for the evening wind -- I hear
leaves whispering the sigh
of footsteps tread, where you crouch.
I get that you want my hands
to slide along this silky
basque and release these gartered
stockings, lovingly caressed
along my thigh until brushed
against the satin of panties,
musky with feminine sensuality.
I'll keep this on for you;
we'll lift my breasts above
these ivory cups and imagine,
exactly, how my berried nipples
must reply to each telepathic
kiss from lips against the sash.
My panties drawn to one side
in restrained liberation for one
french tipped finger to explore
as I close my eyes and you
open your mouth to taste
the air my sighs ride upon.
The imagery in this poem is deliciously sensual, leading so perfectly to that erotic moment at the end - the one to read again and again. I tried to work out what was 'the problem' you referred in line one, but could find none. It was all beautiful to me.
"My panties drawn to one side
in restrained liberation for one
french tipped finger to explore
as I close my eyes and you
open your mouth to taste
the air my sighs ride upon."
That part made my mouth water.
Erotic in the best way. No low tone, as Tath already said. I read and read it again. This is marvelously creepy and subliminalin a Film Noir way.
Tess
"I'll keep this on for you;
we'll lift my breasts above
these ivory cups and imagine,
exactly, how my berried nipples
must reply to each telepathic
kiss from lips against the sash."
Well this woke me up this morning.
Very sexy and seductive without all the typical clichéd phrases
Nice work