- Erotic Poetry
- to wake
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Click herefingers brushing through
pillow-tossled hair
drawing sheet down to see
the gentle rise and fall
of love's breath
leaning across revealed chest
kissing slender throat
murmuring in ear
The above came out of a Challenge in the Poetry forum. It was inspired by "To Sleep" by 2rivers.
- COMMENTS
Samandirielabout 19 years agoShort but sweet, all the right things rolled into a perfect little package.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 19 years agoit was Me waking up to that reveal of love's appreciation. So much was expressed in so few words here, Remec. The "less is more" really worked in the composition of this piece. Thank you.
Vixxx
My Erotic Tailabout 19 years agoYour poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
Thanks for the journey~
