First, I glide at the knee. To the thigh and between the legs. All over there with long, slender fingers. Kisses across it all with slow lingering in spots of my choosing. The toes and fingertips. The nose and eyes. Those eyes. Kisses over cheeks, thanking the gods for your attention. Enjoying every inch of your body, allowed to do what I've wanted for so long. Or we could tussle lightly and just screw.
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for your feedback. Nice thoughts!
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You poem is lovely and very sexy in a playful, lighthearted way.
One small quibble - in this case, I think some of the sentences could really use the extra emphasis of being set off on their own lines. The one that made me think that first was "Those eyes." To me, I heard it being said with indrawn breath, softly and sexily. With extra sauce...more...
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