- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Toddler Fodder
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What photogenic toddlers
-baby breath cannon fodder
(tell me when)
i hope you enjoy the fallout
Pullout Gaza strip
right to the bone
& shave our heads at gunpoint
Milk this till
your blue in the face
Go on
hold the ham overboard
watch 'em wiggle & waif
crinkle chaif
Dialing back
Dialing back
uncurling
always changing the tune
(You make the water
electric &
the
air burrrrn)
Unacceptable target dates -learn to unlearn
(you make
the skys recede
the hilltops scroll)
& Throw the suds OUT
Crawl baby crawl
crawl
(and tell me WHEN)
hope
you
enjoy
the
fall
out
I didn't clean everythi ng
up just so you could rain on our parade
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsover 16 years agolove your crazy phrasing and original word choices, you have an off the beaten path style that is a pleasure.
KOLKOREover 16 years agoConfess to being intrigued by: 1. references to withdrawal from Gaza 2. Strong resemblance (have you read?) to YEhuda Amichai Iconic poem which uses that chilling image of crawling babies then attaches it directly to the combat field. If you have, I'd say it's an honor (imho) to be influenced by him if not do me a favor and read his poems. I am POSITIVE that you will like them. MANY of them were translated into English. <P>
On the other hand I confess to being confused by the poem but maybe I’ll have better luck on another read. Oh, the name of the poem is "God has mercy on the kindergarten’s children".
