Toilets are like people
you search them in despair
almost everyday...

Some are nice, clean, well- presented
Some are horrible, dirty, disgusting
you are not aware,
until you step in
and you have no choice
but to stay...

you sit there patiently
look around
vivid colours, patterned tiles, smells Jasmin
you dream,murmur sweet melodies
you forget the pains,
yes, you had a pain while ago
life is good, perfect
never feel like getting up
from the toilet seat!
but they are very rare...

Sometimes you enter
within seconds
the view of poop floating commodes
piss-smelling filthy scribbled walls
flies roaming around
make you almost faint, nauseous.
four walls watching you fiercely
no space to move
unsafe doors, empty toilet rolls
you sweat & panicked
so impatient
to run away...

you are not aware
you have no choice
but to stay
to stay
you need them all,
at least temporarily
for two minutes,
for ten minutes
even more
just to soothe
the pains!

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