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Click hereI nestled in that place
between asleep, and awake
an erotic fairytale in the making
as moons, and stars danced
in onyx sable, and blue thoughts.
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Listening to the silence
of each moment
I breathed in eternity
and closed my eyes
to yesterday.
To make it even better, I would add a few commas, and change the title. Other than that, no changes needed. Nice poem.