- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Tongues
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Tongue under tongue under
tongue
and both sharp and both
insoluble
and almost thistle and almost
stone
possession sadism nitroglycerine
or more destructive
Tongues sometimes blades
in the mouths
of lovers
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 19 years agofirst two lines captured me
last three lines floored me
Maria2394over 19 years agoforceful driving poem, did someone use the word drill yet? it drilled the word *tongues* into my minds eye, made me see the whole thing, I LOVE poetry that gives me an instant vision, great work :)
annaswirlsover 19 years agoDamn girl! Quite a sharp metaphor (I hope!) This one will stick with me for quite a while-- thanks for sharing these poems with us yesterday, today.
I dont use the thermometer
slavegurlover 19 years agolike blades in the mouths of lovers.. hmmmm..... nice image, and yet not so nice image, isn't it?
DeepAsleepover 19 years agoBeing new to this, I find it hard to be less than verbose, in poetry, but you take a simplistic tack, here, that gets to the heart without beating around the bush. Nicely done.
