- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Tonight, In A Dream.
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Written by jes_da_man:
Tuesday, September 18, 2001 - 6:08:00 AM.
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Tonight, I looked up at the stars
And I gazed upon the moon,
I wondered where you were
And hoped that I would see you soon.
Tonight, I wished I was there with you.
My mind filled with thoughts of us,
Of you being there and of me being here
And I wondered if you were thinking the same thing too.
Tonight, I know I'll have a dream,
And I know you'll look, oh so fine,
And all too real this dream will seem.
But it will all be images in my mind.
Tonight, in a dream I'll caress your soft skin.
I'll run my fingers through your hair
And even though your image is all I'll see,
I know that I'll feel your presents here.
Tonight, in a dream I'll admire your beauty
And you, with my heart, my eyes will share.
The beauty of your chin, mouth, nose and eyes,
Which all add up to a face so fare.
Tonight, in a dream we'll express our love
And without doubt we'll surely know,
That our love cannot be denied,
Because we love each other so.
Tonight, I prayed that you can accept
How much, for you, I really care.
A person who loves you the way I do,
You surely will not find anywhere.
Tonight, in my mind I saw the day
When our feelings, in person, we will share.
Because the way I feel without you,
I for only so long can bare.
- COMMENTS
jes_da_manabout 13 years agoAuthorOnce more, thank you for your comments MyZenTrail and Koba. Again they are immensely appreciated.
I am ecstatic that you both enjoyed the poem.
And now I have another word I can utilize as a tag... 'Passion'. ;)
And yes you are correct Koba. The word 'presents', in the 4th stanza, should indeed be "presence". Thank you very much for bringing that to my attention. I shall immediately revise the original poem, and correct this discrepancy.
Sincerely,
jes_da_man
MyZenTrailabout 13 years agothe main thing I derived from this
is the genuine passion (-.-)
Kobaabout 13 years agoA good poem to read to a lover!
In the 4th stanza, I believe "presents" should probably be "presence".
