- Erotic Poetry
- too horny for foreplay
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Click hereI turn around to lock the door
In an instant
Clothes melt away vanishing from your frame
Flesh revealed
Giggling you flee from my animalistic lunge
Roaring in excitement
I give chase like a predator on the savannah
I tackle you to the floor
My own clothes a hinderance
I tear them from my body,
undressing is for humans
it is all teeth, biting and clawing
nails rend as you drag me to you
our mouths crash together
tasting tongues and lips
you urgently reach down and force me
into you
the soft collision as I nail you to the floor
- COMMENTS
todski28almost 11 years agoAuthor. I appreciate the 5 and the comments, it seems like a sympathy fuck more than a genuine five hahaha I will accept it like a teenage boy in heat though :-)
twelveoonealmost 11 years agoundressing is for humans
this is a good line, even great in context
the rest i've seem to have seen before
title is good
5ed - but newb 5
todski28almost 11 years agoAuthorPretty soon I'm going to start expecting more raps on the knuckles and harsher critiquing to help push me to the next level of writing :-)
Angelinealmost 11 years agocause I think you're a quick learner and it shows in this poem. This stanza~
it is all teeth, biting and clawing
nails rend as you drag me to you
our mouths crash together
tasting tongues and lips
you urgently reach down and force me
into you
the soft collision as I nail you to the floor
has almost no "telling," and that last line especially says a great deal with very few words, the trick being that you found just the right words. :)
