Torture

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miriam68
miriam68
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Torture


He’s so rude.
Unbelievably crude
I tend to brood
But then he’s so shrewd
And then I’m so screwed.
As in deep doodoo,
Vixen to his voodoo.

Tortured so I can barely stand him,
But then he makes me want to brand him.
I’ve no more bills to hand him.
Maybe then, I’ll land him.

miriam68
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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
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too much rhyme, forced, it felt forced. I think you can do much better. Keep writing!