Tortured Soul 3

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theloonie
theloonie
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Something I want but I dare not take
Burning my heart whenever I awake
Wanting to touch but I don’t dare
Cursing my life that is very unfair
Wishing I hadn’t let go that day long past
Wondering how long this pain will last
Searching for something to fill this gap
Knowing the answer won’t fall in my lap
Debating where I should go from here
Since losing control is what I fear
Beating myself for what I desire
Trying to extinguish this damned fire
Looking for ways to stay in check
Always avoiding the thought "what the heck"
Keeping these feelings locked deep inside

theloonie
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WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
what you're describing

is something many of us have felt and had to deal with. One suggestion. Offer your readers a little more. Give us an idea about what's torturing your soul. I know you have a story you want to share, but this poem is too abstract. What is the pain? What is the desire? I want something concrete. Describe an incident, a person in your life, sights, sounds, etc.

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