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byAliceChaney©

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In the shadows beyond the flame
        you define me
On the cutting edge of pain
        you design me
Hold me, bind me, use and lose and find me

Belonging to you, body and mind
Submission to your will we bind
Transgression in sensation

I belong to this place
        I refine you
Boundaries fade in this space
        I entwine you
Take me, beat me, violate and heat me

Into the dark souls hollow, where you own me
No one else may follow, only you know me
Obsession into motivation

Trust beyond the pale to find
        You resign me
We are but two sides of one kind
        You assign me

Keep me, heed me, cherish and need me
In my heart, my thoughts, my mind
Wherever I look its you I find

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by tristantrotsky06/20/16

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A nice rhyme-scheme Alice, you are a real poet...

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by Anonymous06/20/16

yo mann

whup dat bitch

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