Touch of Desire

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The desire to touch, feel, caress.
Someone worth dying for,
Someone who you get.

That longing is so old, it transcends time..
And space is something that gets very old
When your stuck in a place.
Where time is nothing more,
Then something that sits, just wastes

Do you understand,
The desire to touch, feel, caress
Someone worth dying for.
Someone who you to do get.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
I was touched...

and I think I understood most, especially the desire to touch those who you get. Thanks for the courage to be simple (but not simplistic), no masks needed.

champagne1982champagne1982almost 16 years ago
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There's a good conversational tone in this piece that allows me to excuse the repeated phrasing. You seem to want to make a mirror of this poem but fall a little short in the last line. Check for the typo, of the extra "to" in there. A solid poem. Thanks for sharing.

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