Tough Love

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I swallow her cast off cruelties
because love coats kisses with glass
to dwell in her favor
one must take her nails

To live one must always be dying
a little inside

The poison of belief
shreds me slowly
where no one can see

Sometimes she asks about my cough

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Wow !!!

Left me Breathless ~!!!

Deep, and dark ...

But

I love it !!!

You imagery just Bites at the reader.

Jerking them in and * placing * them

at the scene of the attack ~

My pick for the day me thinks ...

Thanks My Friend ~

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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Startling write. The dark-humored last line is a killer.

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